He was 13, then, and he was called a prodigy by his parents. Little wonder, for Cyrille often summoned his friends for no other purpose than to polish his oratory, and to fashion himself thus, that those in his company suffered no doubt of the greatness of their host. They were little more than an audience of bodies. They listened intently, for nothing so tempted punishment as the appearance of boredom. They did not mistake kindness where smug superiority was plain to see, yet they respected Cyrille and were bound to him, as flowers are bound that grow in the shade of a great oak. Something then happened that should never have happened. It was about the year of his sixteenth birthday. The son had begun to quit the lessons of experience, and now looked about him for worthier teachers. It was Friday evening, and the house heaved with rhapsodies of mirthful laughter. Again, Cyrille stood next to the great clock in the hallway, and gazed upon the scene of the banquet. He gazed with the starving desire to take part. At length, as the mad company toasted once again, he crept from the shadows of the hallway, fully into the light of the banquet hall. The laughter ceased. The guests straightened in their chairs. Their goblets came to rest unevenly upon the table cloth. Many ladies drew linens to their lips, imprinting them red. And all seemed terribly embarrassed, supposing perhaps that their laughter had stirred the boy from his slumber. “Oh, dear,” he heard murmur.
“Cyrille,” said the father. “This is my son.” And he gestured to the boy.
“Please,” said Cyrille. “I believe I’ve met each of you.” Herewith, he went to a corner and collected a stray chair. He made a seat for himself near the head of the table. A strained laughter escaped some few individuals, followed by an uncomfortable clearing of their throats.
May 18, 2009 at 11:29 pm |
I will be honest Marlon and say I have not been as into this short story. I am not sure why…I loved your short story on Heaven much better…where did that go?
I am proud you are going back to some of your earlier style of writing, while I know that is sometimes harder for the reader to digest, you are so amazing at that deep, rich, writing it is fun just to see the vocabulary and how talented you are at it. Maybe this story hasn’t grabed me…but I am still reading. I wasn’t as into Cyrille’s age as much as why he keeps himself seprate from others. Why is that? I know you won’t tell but keep us on the fish hook until the next post.
May 19, 2009 at 2:44 am |
Hello. I just wanted to clarify that these installments are not going to become a short story. They’re writing exercises.
I am interested in people who become obsessed with society, who idolize culture and breeding, but stifle nature.
May 19, 2009 at 3:55 am |
I have to say, I don’t exactly know where this is going and what you want us to out of this or what feeling you are putting forth, but this exercise gave me an errie feeling. I really need to know more about him. Are his parents keeping him put away and he got out of his room, and that is way everyone is shocked. Or is it that since you are interested with people who are “obsessed” with society are you showing how uncaring and insencere they can be. Does he just not have the “right look”. Is her just not “perfect”. I know its an excersise, but I need more. Sorry
May 19, 2009 at 4:23 am |
Ahhh…ok, I must have missed that they were writing exercises. Sorry about that. Still stand by the richness and depth of what you produce even if it is a exerise. I will take each segment as a stand alone then. It was nice to see a post in any case.
May 19, 2009 at 6:08 pm |
Thanks for the compliments! I’ll be posting additional segments this week. I must say, I’m quite happy there are requests for the plot to thicken